Rabbit Road Race - composition OK?
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@jenn This reminds me of Cool Runnings and it looks to me like the fourth/back bunny is falling off or struggling to jump onto the bobsled.
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@KevinTreaccar yay, you got it, thanks!
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@jenn feel the rhythm, feel the rhyme, look out Jamaica itβs bobsled time! This is looking great!
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@jenn I think it's lovely! I like all the curves. Perhaps the horizontal line in front of the mountains bothers me a little though β it could be less straight - maybe like a flattish U-shape? That's just my sense though, it's not well-founded in any experience of bobsledding down mountains.
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@Asyas_illos thanks
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@lucy_gow thank you so much
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@jenn A good composition, I would make the central figures and car larger to add impact.
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@PenAndrew ok thanks very much
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This is so much fun! He's falling/being blow off the end of the bobsled, right? I think your composition is working well. I like how the mountains and stream in the background are mimicking the curve of the track. I also think it has a good sense of movement to it. Keep going!
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@jenn I really like it, great colors!