March lucky 3 ideas, input?
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Three ideas I'm kicking around. Basic ideas.
A-Lucky boatsman- submarine saves the day
B- Lucky dog, ice cream day in the park
C- Lucky girl-disaster averted by a squirrelThanks for your input!
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@Larue I love a! It reads clear right off the bat!
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@Larue i think they all convey lucky, but I think A is the most dramatic and funniest. That person is definitely lucky.
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@Larue I love the Lucky Dog and ice cream!!!! Love your sketches
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A is my pick!
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@Larue All great ideas. A is my favorite--most unique and very funny. Feels very sophisticated (i.e., The New Yorker). But kids would get it, too. C is second favorite--lots of action and emotion, cause and effect.
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Nice work!
C is a great concept because all of the elements would naturally exist in that environment. I could see the character retelling the story. "You're never going to believe it..."
A, while lucky, seems a little out of left field. It would need some logical reason for the sub to be there.
B is cute but, I've got a feeling that dog would have eaten that ice cream off the ground just as quickly.
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@ArtistErin Thanks, time to narrow it down!
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@Griffin Thanks for picking one!
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@ThomCharles Thanks for your feedback, I'm trying to narrow it down.
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@Johanna-Kim Thanks, might have to do two!
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@Asyas_illos thanks for your input:)
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@Kim-Rosenlof Thanks, I know I'd be relieved!
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I love a! Great story!
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Iām torn between a and c. Both will depend on final interpretation.