October "sprout" WIP
I'm thinking about doing a loose piece as a "sprout" entry using my September character. This has been a bear of a month because I'm working on more than one bureaucratic tangle, but I've finally opened up a few days to work, and doing a quick piece might be a nice exercise in not agonizing!
Anyway, can you tell what the story is in this sketch, and do the values and placement help tell the story? Thanks for any feedback!
K.Flagg last edited by
@LauraA I loved your September Character design, I think you have an amazing style and I can't wait to see what you do with this one. I think it reads well. She is picking mushrooms and they are all hiding from her. Very Cute!
Kim Rosenlof last edited by
@LauraA The composition and character are really good. I also like the values.
@K-Flagg Yes, thank you! I meant it as funny, but maybe one shouldn't think about it too much! Here's a different take. This one is more about the hiding and less about the mischief between the mushrooms. The question is, is it still "sprout-y"?