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    • Kim Rosenlof
      Kim Rosenlof @Valerie Light last edited by

      @Valerie-Light I don't have any suggestions right now, but I think all three characters are really cute and I love the different poses you have already done! I am excited to see the end results!

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      • jdeebella
        jdeebella @Valerie Light last edited by

        @Valerie-Light I agree with Kim, I love what I see here!

        Jdeebella
        Illustrator and maker
        https://www.instagram.com/jdeebella

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          bridgetbick last edited by

          These are awesome!! I have an eight year old daughter and I think you nailed it, the poses, the expression, and the style. Looking good! Can’t wait to see more.

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          • Valerie Light
            Valerie Light last edited by

            @bridgetbick @Kim-Rosenlof @jdeebella Thank you for the great encouragement!
            I'm trying to think of a funny/quirky hobby for her to have. Like making drawings of insects, or building a go-kart, or. . . something. Any ideas?

            www.valerielightillustration.com
            www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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            • Valerie Light
              Valerie Light last edited by

              Character design progress update:
              More exploratory sketching. I'm playing with new approaches to a grayscale ink wash style, facial expressions, and character consistency. I like the simpler approaches better, and I think I have some more practice to do on nailing down a consistent style. Feedback is welcome!
              9.18.21 face sketches.jpeg
              Screen Shot 2021-09-19 at 3.45.02 PM.png

              www.valerielightillustration.com
              www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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              • Kim Rosenlof
                Kim Rosenlof @Valerie Light last edited by

                @Valerie-Light Your character has a lot of fun interests! I especially love the go-kart. The ink wash is fun too. Some of the expression pictures do not look consistent and like the same person. Close, but not quite. You could do the line thing on character sheets (not sure if there is a name for it) where you draw straight lines across a page. Then draw the head several times, but with different expressions. The lines could be for her eyes, mouth, nose etc. So the line up. That might help. I hope that makes sense.
                I have a hard time keeping my characters consistent, but have noticed that when I draw the lines, it does help some.

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                • Kim Rosenlof
                  Kim Rosenlof @Valerie Light last edited by

                  @Valerie-Light I am mostly thinking that the one where she looks disgusted on the bottom and the one where she holds the grasshopper are the ones that aren't consistent.

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                  • Valerie Light
                    Valerie Light @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                    @Kim-Rosenlof Thanks, Kim you're totally right.

                    www.valerielightillustration.com
                    www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                    • Valerie Light
                      Valerie Light last edited by

                      Posting more progress! I've moved into Procreate now while I work out poses and expressions and proportions, and just kind of getting to know my character.
                      I think that next, I'm going to do another round of paint tests in ink wash with these on my lightbox, and settle on a style and value range that feels right.
                      Screen Shot 2021-09-20 at 10.16.27 PM.png

                      www.valerielightillustration.com
                      www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                      • jenithornhill
                        jenithornhill last edited by

                        These are fantastic! I love all the poses.

                        Jennifer Thornhill
                        www.jenniferthornhill.ca
                        www.instagram.com/jenniferthornhillillo
                        https://www.facebook.com/jennifer.lockethornhill

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                        • Kim Rosenlof
                          Kim Rosenlof @Valerie Light last edited by

                          @Valerie-Light These are great! Well done!

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                          • Pamela Fraley
                            Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Valerie Light last edited by

                            @Valerie-Light These are great! They are a little reminiscent of Fancy Nancy for me. 🙂

                            instagram.com/fraleycreates

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                            • Valerie Light
                              Valerie Light last edited by

                              Thanks for the help and encouragement, everyone. Posting my final entry here:
                              9.30.21_Valerie_Light.jpg

                              www.valerielightillustration.com
                              www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                              • Kim Rosenlof
                                Kim Rosenlof @Valerie Light last edited by

                                @Valerie-Light This turned out great! I love all the writing and how it shows the process.

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