Thank you for all the feedback and suggestions!! I’m really new to the forum here and still trying to figure out how to really dig in and contribute, but I’m looking forward to being more a part of this.
If you missed Critique Arena yesterday, the recording and winners are on the website: https://www.critiquearena.com/35lucky
This month's arena was a little different, but the info is well worth the watch!
Good luck with your treehouses!
@Jeremiahbrown Aw, thank you! I had to spend a day or two licking my wounds after being the 'bad' example of what not to do, lol. Your note was very welcome. I've decided I still like art and still have a lot to learn, so back at it! Thanks again!
Alright,I m calling this done!
In the journey of searching and avenging the shark goblins who have Josephs underwater village under capture, some mistakes were made by the young at heart Dominic.
He stays fierce though,no problem at all!!
Always having a blast with full illustrations!!
Thanks for the comments! I ended up throwing in one more goblin and darkening the ones in the foreground a bit as well as adding some additional highlights to the otters to bring some more focus to them. If anything else really sticks out or could use some improvement please let me know!
No prob. I’m glad you shared it. I like this kind of image because it makes you appreciate something simple. I just noticed one more thing... it looks like you have a bit of an optical illusion going on... The top level of the building rests on a beam that connects to the walls on the front and back of the building at different points. I think my description is vague, so if it’s not clear just let me know. 🙂 I can try to describe my thoughts better.
@franksandovalart Thank you as well for the paint over! I like how bright it is and how it really helps the silhouettes. I also love the addition of the girl's headband to allow for her face to show up. I think that I will definitely add that into my new version. Thanks again!