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    • Georgios Christopoulos

      Rabbit/Dragon Road race wip! Come give your 2 cents!
      Projects • critique arena wip characterdesign childrens book challenge • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      PenAndrew

      @Georgios-Christopoulos In fact I liked the first image you posted best, as it looked cleaner and really comic book.

    • AustinShurtliff

      Winners of the May 2022 Critique Arena
      Announcements • critique arena students • • AustinShurtliff

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      AustinShurtliff

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      If you missed Critique Arena yesterday, the recording and winners are on the website: https://www.critiquearena.com/37storm
      Great work everyone!

    • Sarah VanDam

      Storm WIP!
      Contest • snail salt storm critique arena duckie • • Sarah VanDam

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      Sarah VanDam

      Thank you for all the feedback and suggestions!! I’m really new to the forum here and still trying to figure out how to really dig in and contribute, but I’m looking forward to being more a part of this.

    • AustinShurtliff

      Winners of the April 2022 Critique Arena
      Announcements • critique arena students • • AustinShurtliff

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      AustinShurtliff

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      If you missed Critique Arena yesterday, the recording and winners are on the website: https://www.critiquearena.com/36designatreehouse
      Great work everyone!

    • AustinShurtliff

      April's Winners and Recording are up!
      Announcements • critique arena students • • AustinShurtliff

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      AustinShurtliff

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      If you missed Critique Arena yesterday, the recording and winners are on the website: https://www.critiquearena.com/35lucky
      This month's arena was a little different, but the info is well worth the watch!
      Good luck with your treehouses!

    • David

      Critique Arena: Special Critique Session
      Announcements • critique arena • • David

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      Cayleen

      @Jeremiahbrown Aw, thank you! I had to spend a day or two licking my wounds after being the 'bad' example of what not to do, lol. Your note was very welcome. I've decided I still like art and still have a lot to learn, so back at it! Thanks again!

    • AustinShurtliff

      Winners of the February Critique Arena
      Announcements • critique arena • • AustinShurtliff

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      lizardillo

      I've watched this on replay. Congrats to both of you, wonderful pieces of work for what looked to be a very tough brief. Nailed it!

    • AustinShurtliff

      Need help testing Critique Arena submission process
      Announcements • critique arena • • AustinShurtliff

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      jenn

      @austinshurtliff yes, I received an email from you on Feb. 28 at 4:05 pm. Thank you!!

    • AustinShurtliff

      Missed Critique Arena? It's up on YouTube!
      Announcements • critique arena • • AustinShurtliff

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      KathrynAdebayo

      @AustinShurtliff Great to put a face to name! Thanks for all you do for SVS to make it a great place for us students.

    • AngelinaKizz

      March Lucky WIP
      Artwork • illustration critique arena • • AngelinaKizz

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      AngelinaKizz

      @angelinakizz not sure if this bumps things up a bit, I’d love some feedback

    • Irina Demirci 'Pak'

      June's contest! / Albert
      Contest • characterdesign contest critique arena • • Irina Demirci 'Pak'

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      Irina Demirci 'Pak'

      @demotlj yaay, this actually worked!! Thank u so much 🤩

    • Georgios Christopoulos

      May Contest Progress! Check it out and share your opinions!
      Sketchbook • may wip critique arena wip • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      Georgios Christopoulos

      Alright,I m calling this done!
      In the journey of searching and avenging the shark goblins who have Josephs underwater village under capture, some mistakes were made by the young at heart Dominic.
      He stays fierce though,no problem at all!!
      Always having a blast with full illustrations!!

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    • s1h0k

      May Contest
      Contest • critique arena creature design • • s1h0k

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      s1h0k

      Thanks for the comments! I ended up throwing in one more goblin and darkening the ones in the foreground a bit as well as adding some additional highlights to the otters to bring some more focus to them. If anything else really sticks out or could use some improvement please let me know!

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    • ?

      Feedback please.
      Artwork • critique feedback critique arena • • A Former User

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      KathrynAdebayo

      No prob. I’m glad you shared it. I like this kind of image because it makes you appreciate something simple. I just noticed one more thing... it looks like you have a bit of an optical illusion going on... The top level of the building rests on a beam that connects to the walls on the front and back of the building at different points. I think my description is vague, so if it’s not clear just let me know. 🙂 I can try to describe my thoughts better.

    • JoshuaDages

      Post-contest Help/Critique of my November Contest Entry
      Contest • critique arena november • • JoshuaDages

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      JoshuaDages

      @franksandovalart Thank you as well for the paint over! I like how bright it is and how it really helps the silhouettes. I also love the addition of the girl's headband to allow for her face to show up. I think that I will definitely add that into my new version. Thanks again!