Hey all! Thanks for you input above! Below is my updated version. This is the "add final objects" step (step 11) in @Will-Terry's course. I've got around 85 objects (not counting things bolted down).
This is NOT a final version by any means. This is just the draft that has all of the objects in it. I will add value, consistent line work, and extra detail on the next pass.
Some help I'm looking for now:
how is the flow of the image? (realizing that it's hard to tell without value)
do you see any major issues or is it confusing at all?
are the objects too detailed or just right?
do you like the cropping I chose (orange border), or should it be different?
Any and all suggestions are welcome. I will be adding more sand, bubbles, shells, etc., in the next version as well.