8 Aug 2019, 00:44

@hoppershaun not sure if I get "obey every command" from it, I get more of a "Oh brother this guy is a jerk". It could be the look in the eye of the one about to jump off. He looks disgusted. Two things, if you change the wing to more of a pointing hand since the other wing looks like a hand holding onto the rope. The other is there is a tangent with his right leg running into the boat. If you put both legs on the ledge and just had him leaning over that would read better. I like the characters and would like to see more of them in different scenes.