I am as @Aleksey patreon from mitchleeuwe and he gave me feedback to try my composition to show from lower angle. Here than two rough sketches in comparison.
Process on work for my portfolio (ongoing)
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Fab! Are you happy with it as that's the important thing?
I think the text gives Flip more of personality now and I would love to see more of these characters
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@hannahmccaffery I am very happy with it, thank You so much. Yeah I am thinking about drawing one more picture to this story
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@MichaelaH oh yeah much better puts you right into the scene
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@MichaelaH P.S. Your signature is so perfect for the childrenβs book market
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@BichonBistro Thank You, I love mouse so
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@MichaelaH I will always love your imaginative animals best but your humans are fabulous too!
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@BichonBistro Thank You so much for liking my work
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Did they specify what you needed to improve with your humans? I think some of them are pretty good, and that last one is great! Life drawing really helps this stuff, if you can't get to a class, just get to a busy area and do some gestures for 30-60 minutes. You will be amazed how much you can pick up and how it translates to your work after a little while.
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@Amanda-Jean I almost never draw ppl, only animals, so I think they didn't like this less amount of ppl I ever drew to that point, I liked to draw animals more, but now I like ppl also. I never really exercised ppl before. I am going to frankfurt book fair this october and I will get feedback there, I will take my new ppl illustrations also with me.
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