31 Jul 2017, 03:37

What a cool project to be a part of. This story is very touching.

I have a few suggestions, some of which are echoing what others have said.

  1. I would sketch out several poses before deciding on the final, to see which one works best.

  2. Possibly tone down the saturation of some of your green elements.

  3. Add in more of the bushes.

  4. Possible curve the tree line as you've done with the ground plane.

  5. Make Liam's body smaller to reflect his age.

  6. Watch for tangents as the family's heads touch the foliage line.

I am not a lawyer, but I would assume using Superman colors are fine, especially since you have changed the logo and have given him gloves. I could be wrong, but I suspect it's fine.

Here is a quick paint over that hopefully illustrates my suggestions, though his body is probably not small enough.

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Good luck on this project! You have a nice start.