1 Aug 2017, 22:35

Ok, so I made most of the changes suggested here. I tried to make Liam look younger by making his body smaller, and I broke up the line of trees and pushed the middle kid back as @bnewman suggested. I toned down the greens a bit, and changed Liam's direction. I didn't change him as much as yours @tessw because his family requested that the cover show him looking down at them and signing I love You as he flies to Heaven, and with that position, he was looking more at the reader.

I am still not sure of where in the picture Liam should be positioned - up, down, left, right. I need to make sure there is enough room for the title, and I need to have the authors and illustrators names at the bottom (4 names) so I cant really cut any of the grass out. Is he ok the way he is, or should he be positioned differently against the trees?

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BTW, this is only a sketch for trying out positions of the characters, etc. Kait will add shading and details later, so we are not asking for input on details at this time.

So in terms of layout, what should we look at next?
Jess and Kait