17 Apr 2023, 21:47

@Robyn-Hepburn I really like the shapes, especially of the wolves!

The only thing that stood out to me upon first read was that the ice is so light, it almost looked like a break in the illustration until I looked a bit longer. Perhaps the ice could come down a little in value and maybe the grass could come up a bit?
I understand youโ€™re trying to show the range of seasons; perhaps a gradient-esque approach would help to blend these contrasting elements into one image? Iโ€™m mostly brainstorming here.

I really like the style though - would peek into this book off the shelf for sure.