1 Dec 2022, 03:32
This is an older one, but I would love to know how I could have done better with the storytelling and composition. 
NEED ART FOR SVS YOUTUBE CRITS!
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This is an older one, but I would love to know how I could have done better with the storytelling and composition.
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Por favor!
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This is a page spread that I did for my BFA project. Seriously want to revisit the idea I had for this project at some point, but with a clean slate.
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Yes please. Feel free to use my critique arena entry!
Love the how to fix your art series. SO helpful!
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Feel free to use my past entries
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Here are a few, really enjoying Fix My Art!
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Fix away!
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This is a book cover idea I had. Never done a cover like this before. Please fix away!
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It may be too late to do this, but just in case, here is mine.
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A couple areas I find difficult are dusk/night lighting and getting plenty of life in an illustration. I made this piece to work on those areas and I think there is plenty of room for improvement.
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These are all great! I see so many great things going on in all of them. The good thing about this lecture series we are doing is we are looking at very specific things in each image. So an image may be working overall, and just need help in one or two specific areas.
So please remember that if you see one of your images and we say it could use improvement in a specific area. : )
We still have at least 7 more of these lectures, so please paste as many images in here as you like! I'm using a smattering of them in the lecture today. I really appreciate you guys putting yourself out there and being open to crits and feedback!
SVS Faculty Instructor
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@Lee-White hi is there a link somewhere to attend or do we just hop over to YouTube at a certain time?
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@Asyas_illos Hi! You can find it here: https://youtu.be/nM_WqCTeZ4o
Director of Sunshine and Rainbows
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Thanks everyone! Keep posting to this thread if you want to appear on future crits!
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Yes please!!! Working on a re-draw of the classic "The Velveteen Rabbit" and trying to develop compositions that are dynamic without being too busy... I'd love a critique! Thank you so much
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This one was from my very first prompt I did for SVS "Dragonfly"
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@Lee-White Here is one that I did of the poem “The Owl and the Pussy Cat”.
When I made it I was satisfied and thought it would be a good portfolio piece. But now it seems like something is off. Help?
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Here is a piece I did using a collage technique. I drew some, photographed some physical items and imported them, and also used some digital layering tricks. My take on the three little pigs.
Thanks for offering the opportunity for scrutiny. I love the style of artists like Melissa Sweet and Emily Gravitt with their collage looking pieces. I am trying to get a similar look to my work.
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@JennyJones I really like this. Nice job with the collage. The expressions on the pigs are great.