@Griffin This is looking so great! If feels like a complete and believable environment and I feel the urgency in the character's faces.
One thing that stuck out at me is how in your quick sketch the body pose of the kid in the back of the bronco is more dynamic and reaching. In your line art, the pose has stiffened up, and makes it seem like the vehicle is parked rather than moving. (And I'm unsure now which it is supposed to be).
Another little thing, is that I felt like the running kid's path would make more sense closer to the road path. You could move this kid more into the road, or curve the road, if you thought they should be in the path.
Sorry if these are late comments! I'm looking forward to seeing the color!
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