10 Feb 2023, 23:00

@AbramHartrick your illustrations are cute, but I think you could do more streamlining. Like the last page instead of saying the spaceship was full of all the food he didn't like, and naming them, you could simply it down to, something like "revealing his hidden stash". Rule of thumb with kids books is show don't tell.
( I can't think of the right wording since I don't know the whole story, so I wouldn't recommend stash since it's more associated with drug use and terminology with children's lit needs to be very considerate )