Wow, very thorough critique, thank you both! My intention was just to have both the characters sheltered together from the rain. I felt the fairy needed a fellow forest-dweller there to make it more interesting. But compositionally it does need work, and I realize they don't quite look "under" the mushrooms.Also, thanks for the tips on referencing dragonfly wings for texture.
So much to work on with my anatomy, lighting, and overall storytelling. Art is never done!