ISOLATION WIP - toughts please

[smoke]

This is what i have bin working on,
perhaps some feedback please?
Yust want to hear your profesional toughts on it before i call it finnished and send it in.
Spank you verry much.

[carlianne]

Such an interesting idea! Love how he is looking right at us.

The perspective on on the ellipses of the barrel don't seem to match with the perspective on the TV stand so I would tweak that if possible

[theprairiefox]

@smoke the idea of Donkey Kong playing his own game is pretty funny.

But I am not 100% sure what the story is. Did just get caught by someone? Is he in jail (bars on window)?

I think you could lean into the funny as well. The pictures could add to the story... some long list love? A broken picture on the ground?

Coming along...

[JudeKillory]

@smoke the video game looks nice, great highlight on the screen. Love the light coming through the blinds.

[Neha Rawat]

Great rendering! I've never played Donkey Kong so I'm not sure if I'm missing some connection to the setting, but it's still a funny image!
I'd just smudge the edges of the light beam coming in through the window. The sharpness of that is really standing out compared to everything else.
Other than that, I really like the expression!

[smoke]

@Neha-Rawat thank you, i will look into that.

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@JudeKillory thanks

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@carlianne Thanks, i'll see if i can fix it

[smoke]

@theprairiefox the window is more simbolic obout how i feel with the corona lockdown, and he looks at us to drag the viewer into his miserable feeling about the whole situation, to get a sort off conection with the viewer. but i wil think about your toughts, thank you

[Rachel Horne]

@smoke I like this a lot, I think the style is really nice. I agree with the comment coming in through the window, the edges could maybe be more smudgy. I like the concept and don't know what expression you're going for but he looks a little guilty to me likes he's been caught off-guard...?

[smoke]

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part 2?
Toughts please

[Kevin Longueil]

@smoke Ha! this cracks me up - I hope you don't mind, I did a quick and not so good draw over to show what i was thinking - i feel like we would see the top of the barrel from our eye level - @carlianne mentioned the ellipsis of it earlier - i tried to get everything to match the same horizon and vanishing points in the image - i think right now that the table, the room, the couch, Kong, and the barrel all have slightly different vanishing points - and possibly our eye level is much higher when looking at Kong than it is for the rest of the room...i could be wrong on this - anyways feel free to ignore

[smoke]

@Kevin-Longueil there are some things I like about your paint over, first off al, DK looks a lots bigger with your Approach, so I will surely will work with that, I yust dont want that the room looks to small, and I ain't a big fan of that that very Blue / saturated color use.
I am yust a very big fan off Marco Bucci, s color use. So that's what I am going for
And your right making the vanishing point lower make DK appear bigger and make you see the top of that barrel, so I will work with that for sure.
Thank you for your input, it makes a big deal for me and it is a great help. Ty

[smoke]

@smoke New attempt with some adjustments you people recommended.
More feeback always welcome.
Thanks everybody for helping me out to be a better artist. your'e all appriciated.

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Thats it, if you got some feedback? please br free to share please.

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