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    ISOLATION WIP - toughts please

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    • smoke
      smoke last edited by

      ISOLATION-may contest svs-learn.jpg This is what i have bin working on,
      perhaps some feedback please?
      Yust want to hear your profesional toughts on it before i call it finnished and send it in.
      Spank you verry much. 😃

      smoke

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      • carlianne
        carlianne last edited by

        Such an interesting idea! Love how he is looking right at us.

        The perspective on on the ellipses of the barrel don't seem to match with the perspective on the TV stand so I would tweak that if possible

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        • theprairiefox
          theprairiefox @smoke last edited by

          @smoke the idea of Donkey Kong playing his own game is pretty funny.

          But I am not 100% sure what the story is. Did just get caught by someone? Is he in jail (bars on window)?

          I think you could lean into the funny as well. The pictures could add to the story... some long list love? A broken picture on the ground?

          Coming along...

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          • JudeKillory
            JudeKillory @smoke last edited by

            @smoke the video game looks nice, great highlight on the screen. Love the light coming through the blinds.

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            • Neha Rawat
              Neha Rawat last edited by

              Great rendering! I've never played Donkey Kong so I'm not sure if I'm missing some connection to the setting, but it's still a funny image!
              I'd just smudge the edges of the light beam coming in through the window. The sharpness of that is really standing out compared to everything else.
              Other than that, I really like the expression!

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              • smoke
                smoke @Neha Rawat last edited by

                @Neha-Rawat thank you, i will look into that. 🙂

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                • smoke
                  smoke @JudeKillory last edited by

                  @JudeKillory thanks 🙂

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                  • smoke
                    smoke @carlianne last edited by

                    @carlianne Thanks, i'll see if i can fix it 🙂

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                    • smoke
                      smoke @theprairiefox last edited by

                      @theprairiefox the window is more simbolic obout how i feel with the corona lockdown, and he looks at us to drag the viewer into his miserable feeling about the whole situation, to get a sort off conection with the viewer. but i wil think about your toughts, thank you

                      smoke

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                      • Rachel Horne
                        Rachel Horne @smoke last edited by

                        @smoke I like this a lot, I think the style is really nice. I agree with the comment coming in through the window, the edges could maybe be more smudgy. I like the concept and don't know what expression you're going for but he looks a little guilty to me likes he's been caught off-guard...?

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                        • smoke
                          smoke @smoke last edited by

                          @smoke

                          part 2?
                          Toughts please

                          kong-mei svs.jpg

                          smoke

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                          • Kevin Longueil
                            Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smoke last edited by Kevin Longueil

                            @smoke Ha! this cracks me up - I hope you don't mind, I did a quick and not so good draw over to show what i was thinking - i feel like we would see the top of the barrel from our eye level - @carlianne mentioned the ellipsis of it earlier - i tried to get everything to match the same horizon and vanishing points in the image - i think right now that the table, the room, the couch, Kong, and the barrel all have slightly different vanishing points - and possibly our eye level is much higher when looking at Kong than it is for the rest of the room...i could be wrong on this - 🙂 anyways feel free to ignore

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                            • smoke
                              smoke @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                              @Kevin-Longueil there are some things I like about your paint over, first off al, DK looks a lots bigger with your Approach, so I will surely will work with that, I yust dont want that the room looks to small, and I ain't a big fan of that that very Blue / saturated color use.
                              I am yust a very big fan off Marco Bucci, s color use. So that's what I am going for
                              And your right making the vanishing point lower make DK appear bigger and make you see the top of that barrel, so I will work with that for sure.
                              Thank you for your input, it makes a big deal for me and it is a great help. Ty

                              smoke

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                              • smoke
                                smoke @smoke last edited by

                                @smoke New attempt with some adjustments you people recommended.
                                More feeback always welcome.
                                Thanks everybody for helping me out to be a better artist. your'e all appriciated.kong-mei svs.jpg

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                                  smoke @smoke last edited by

                                  @smoke kong-mei svs.jpg

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                                  • smoke
                                    smoke @smoke last edited by

                                    @smoke

                                    Thats it, if you got some feedback? please br free to share please.

                                    kong-mei svs.jpg

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                                      smoke @smoke last edited by

                                      @smoke kong-mei svs.jpg

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