3rd Thursday WIP will probably need to redo.

  • SVS OG

    Suggestions please! The painting isn't working for me. It's in need of changes and I'd like to hear any suggestions you might have, please!

  • I think that Peter Pan and tinkerbell are so big the rest of your illustration is lost. Are they what you want to focus on? I would make them on the the same scale as the rest and move them to the right and out of the center. I think your characters are good, great concept, you just need to work on the composition.

  • What about a scene with just Peter Pan and Tink flying with Santa? He was able to make his friends fly so Santa wouldn't need the sleigh or other "reindeer". Or if you wanted you could rewind a bit to Santa getting Pan on the phone? Lol, not as much action but a lot of people are doing the flying scene.

  • SVS OG

    Thanks for the feedback. I can see what you mean about peter being so much bigger and losing the lost boys. That's a really good suggestion. What do you think about the colors? Santa seems pretty small too. Something besides flying? I'll have to think about that though. Peter is, after all know for his flying skills 🙂 Maybe I'll do more sketches fo different scenarios to post for more feedback. Thanks so much! I'm not really happy with it at this point.

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