@Rich-Green thank you so very much for the critiques I will work on all of your suggestions because they are spot on! It's so weird how I can't seem to see these things myself, I guess that's why editors or so important!
I have been out of commission for a while now and am trying to get back into the swing of things. This is my latest piece and I would love any suggestions or comments. Do you like it better with or without crackle?