"The Moment Before I Lost My Mom" Kids Book Project Progress for SCBIW Portfolio Preview. . .and eventually Self Publish by April 2020



  • What a beautiful idea, I'm really looking forward to seeing how you progress with it and obviously we're all here to help if you need it πŸ™‚


  • SVS OG

    @Squirrel-Size This is a great project and I wish you a tonne of luck and success with it. I'm looking forward to seeing your updates. And fair play for making such a commitment to it. I have no doubt it will stand to you massively going forward.



  • I have to say, this will be wonderful emotional project fo you. This year I did a custom memory book project. There were 4 friends, which did a lot of things together and last year, one of them died in tragic accident. His wife gave birth to his son some month later. They wanted to show the kid some stories of his dad and also they wanted this book for themself to remember and to laught about their fun stories. So they wrote 16 stories and contacted me. I have to say, they were only happy funny stories, but alltogether it was wonderful to draw this stories.

    So your project will be great, but also difficult, because it is from Your life, many feelings there. Wish You lot of luck and success.



  • @Squirrel-Size Thank you for sharing this. I understand it's a deeply personal project, and I love that it will also be really meaningful to readers of your book who have had similar experiences. It will be as uplifting as you are hoping to make it, I'm sure.

    Your garden is absolutely stunning, by the way. I would love to see how it features in your book! You'll have my support throughout this endeavour.



  • @juliepeelart Awe Thanks πŸ™‚ Yeah! The title is something I haven't figured out yet! So totally down to any suggestions πŸ™‚ I'll add that one to my list!



  • Thanks @Annemieke! I'm excited to try to portray the rock garden too. I may have to do some extra practice on drawing flowers lol. Sorry to hear about your mum. Its hard no matter what age.



  • @hannahmccaffery Thanks! I really appreciate your all's support!



  • @ShannonBiondi Thanks girl! I really hope so πŸ™‚



  • @MichaelaH Wow, that is a really cool project! But its sad too. I love what the three friends did to keep the stories and memories alive. That must have been such a cool project to work on πŸ™‚ Thanks Michael



  • Thanks @animatosoor I hope it will be uplifting too. Hahahaha, thanks, I wish I still had my garden, but I travel so much now, it would look a wee bit more weedier then it was then.



  • @Squirrel-Size this is one of those images that has really stuck in my mind ever since you posted it. I am so glad to read that you are turning this into a book. It will be wonderful to watch your progress ❀️



  • Wow that touches my heart! I'm excited to have you @BichonBistro along for the ride πŸ™‚


  • SVS Team SVS OG

    @Squirrel-Size wishing you the best on your journey here. Just keep in mind it will get very overwhelming after a few days/weeks working on it. Just take a break and recharge your mind. I know for experience if I don't take that break I start to turn out work I am not happy with. After a short break of a day or two, things seem to spark again.



  • What a lovely project! I'm wishing you all the best as you tackle it and offering any kind of feedback/support if needed. I can't wait to see this come to life!



  • Thanks man! Wow good advice @Chip-Valecek! I will be taking that to heart. That would be a good excuse to go visit my buddies for a few days lol



  • Awe! thanks @Alicja-W! Yes, any feedback/support would be awesome! πŸ™‚



  • STORYBOARD!

    here is my lovely sketchy storyboard. My text is not set in gold yet. I'm still trying to figure out the best wording and what not. Anyone good at word-flow stuff out there? Feel free to put some cents in. I've been working on this storyboard for several weeks now. I did some last minute touches before posting them below.

    The composition of the pictures are also not set in gold either, i'm just trying to get an idea of the flow of the book. Any tips, suggestions or ideas about the flow/composition are welcome! Each spread has a number on the top left. Right now this book project only contains 24 pages. A standard kids book usually has around 32 pages. So I might be inserting a spread or two more. Maybe somewhere near the end? What do you all think? My page formate is the same ratio as 11 x 8.5 (landscape) but it will be a bit smaller when printed (the line in the middle of each spread is about where the gutter would be). I also plan to have a title page art too, but I'll get to that later.
    If you notice I've included a pair of humming birds in each page (a mama and daughter bird). My moms favorite bird was the humming bird, and I saw them in my garden all the time. I thought it fitting to include some in the illustrations.

    I've self-published several books before, but never made a kids book "the proper way." Like taking all the steps such as: storyboarding, thumbnails, color/ value studies and all. This is my first book I plan to do proper like. I've also never done a legit Dummy book before. I heard a lot of Art Directors/Agents like to see a book idea all black & white line work. Not that I necessarily want an Agent at this time though. But I figured it could be good practice for the future perhaps. But from my experience as a graphic designer and building a GD portfolio, I've have found high praise by showing the different stages of a project as well as the finished product/project in a portfolio. So my plan right now is to have some pages of the Dummy book fully rendered while others will be in different stages of rendition (Black and white). What are your all thoughts on that?

    I think my biggest concern at the moment is the end of the book; the last two spreads. I feel like it might be a bit choppy.

    IMG_0642.jpg IMG_0643.jpg
    IMG_0644.jpg
    IMG_0645.jpg
    IMG_0646.jpg
    IMG_0647.jpg
    IMG_0648 2.jpg
    IMG_0649.jpg
    IMG_0650.jpg
    IMG_0651.jpg
    IMG_0652.jpg
    IMG_0653.jpg

    P.S. Also, I'm a hug fan of goats. I have been one since I was a wee tike. Most of my books have goats in them. So if any of you all spot a squirrel that looks a lot like a goat, shout it out, so I can make the changes accordingly (I feel like I tend to give the squirrels longer necks and snouts then they should have). Thanks you all for your support so far πŸ™‚



  • @Squirrel-Size I am not a writer, so take this with a grain of salt, but I really like the lyrical flow of pages 4-6. I think you might consider eliminating the word β€œcan” on those pages and the word β€œalso” on the last page.



  • @BichonBistro Oh yes! I really like how the text on pages 4-6 sound without the word "can"! I'll be editing those out πŸ™‚ I think I'll also be taking out the "also" on the last page too, thanks!



  • @Squirrel-Size - it was so wonderful to see the development for "The Moment Before" challenge and I'm so excited to hear you are pursuing this project.

    The storyboard is unfolding so beautifully. I might wait until the next stage to provide any feedback, but just wanted to let you know how much I love your project.


Log in to reply