WIP Critique needed
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Hello everyone,
May I ask for critiques regarding the composition?
This is the ending to a children's book story. The scarf is a gift from the rabbit to the pig. They are BFFs. THis is a evening snow scene.
I am trying to capture a sweet moment of a heartwarming friendship.
Thank you so much!
Lisa -
@lisanganart The composition is very cute and heartwarming. I do see a couple of tangents, one between the pig’s Pom Pom and the tree, and one with the branch touching the edge of the page. The perspective of the window on the house is slightly off on the right side.
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@inkandspatter Thank you! You are right. I'll fix them.
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I think the hat is a bit distracting because it's unique looking with the 2 floofs But nothing else looks out of place in the same way so it draws a lot of attention. I also am not sure if you need the foot prints in the snow, they dont feel like they are adding anything for me, are you trying to show they are neighbors and the little one came over to hang out with the piggy?
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alekseyillustration.com -
@Aleksey Thank you! I'll fix the pom pom...maybe smaller or reduce to one works better. I just thought footprints should be there since they have to walk to the fireplace. I'll take note of that and make them more subtle in the color phase. Thanks so mcuh!
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@lisanganart yeah no problem! This is very cute
