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    The odds that he will get away are rather small - hidden WIP

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    • Jonas Zavacky
      Jonas Zavacky @Eric Castleman last edited by

      @eric-castleman thank you πŸ˜ƒ hehe I am looking forward to your sumbission then

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      • juliepeelart
        juliepeelart SVS OG last edited by

        There is a lot of emotion and anticipation in this piece. Well done!

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        • Jonas Zavacky
          Jonas Zavacky last edited by Jonas Zavacky

          Ok, so I worked on that a little further... I changed the view a bit and tried to draw the scene to fit more into the world of Akira... also I double checked the perspective and I think it makes more sense now.

          This is a drawing of the background I will paint tomorrow and then I will add characters. My aim is to really get as close as possible to the execution of Akira.

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          • kylebeaudette
            kylebeaudette @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

            @jonas-zavacky I just watched Akira this weekend 🀣
            This looks great so far!

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            • MichaelMattocks
              MichaelMattocks @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

              @jonas-zavacky I think you lose the focus now. in the top one you have a character at the end of the alley which draws your attention. your hidden guy is cropped and looks like you are hiding him in the composition. Dropping the view done changes the feel.

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              • Jonas Zavacky
                Jonas Zavacky @MichaelMattocks last edited by

                @michaelmattocks hmm, I see what you mean. We'll see how I will manage that. Maybe I can make the character that is hiding be almost lost in shadow and left the stuff that is important only so the feel may be close. The character in the alley will be there too.

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                • Jonas Zavacky
                  Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                  alright... this is it for the background i think.. any advice before I add the characters? πŸ™‚
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                  • Jonas Zavacky
                    Jonas Zavacky last edited by Jonas Zavacky

                    alright πŸ˜ƒ I changed the lighting as it doesn't looked like a night scene
                    0_1532805611125_hidden background.jpg

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                    • leothejediartist
                      leothejediartist last edited by

                      I'm digging this but I'm also torn. I did like how the composition of the original post looked, but I think the most updated scene has alot more feeling to it, more atmosphere. Can't wait to see the finished piece πŸ‘

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                      • Jonas Zavacky
                        Jonas Zavacky @leothejediartist last edited by Jonas Zavacky

                        @leothejediartist I totally see what you mean! πŸ˜ƒ But well... I decided to go for the second composition. (it is not I don't like the current result)

                        Thank you πŸ™‚

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                        • leothejediartist
                          leothejediartist last edited by

                          I totally support the decision lol didn't mean to sound negative. Unrelated related point, is Akira on Netflix or anything? I've never seen it

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                          • AbbyLucero
                            AbbyLucero last edited by

                            This is so spot on! Love the composition and atmosphere with the new lighting. Can’t wait to see how it looks composited all together! πŸ˜ƒ

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                            • Jonas Zavacky
                              Jonas Zavacky @leothejediartist last edited by

                              @leothejediartist hehe okay πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ well I don't know if it is on Netflix, but if you just search "akira online" there should be results πŸ˜ƒ

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                              • Jonas Zavacky
                                Jonas Zavacky @AbbyLucero last edited by

                                @abbylucero Thank you so much Abby!! πŸ˜ƒ

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                                • Donfito
                                  Donfito @Jonas Zavacky last edited by Donfito

                                  @jonas-zavacky

                                  definitely the last color composition, it looks more mysterious, purple is a good color too make this kind of feelings too.
                                  waiting to see the final result.

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                                  • Jonas Zavacky
                                    Jonas Zavacky @Donfito last edited by

                                    @donfito hey! thanks I agree. I already posted the final result into the challenge thread πŸ™‚

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