Travel WIP - tips welcome
demotlj last edited by
@sofie_designed I think this is much better. Not only does the whale stand out more but the setting feels more like the deep ocean.
lenwen last edited by
@sofie_designed this look like really in the ocean now! I also thought @Gary-Wilkinson tips will complete to make it even better
the latest thing, I think the whale's color or tone is a bit too warm.. maybe can make it more greenish or move to colder tone (CMIW)
looking forward for the finish piece!
@lenwen I made the whale in a warmer colour so that it would stand out more against the background... maybe that was not the best idea... I'll work on it some more
Sarah LuAnn last edited by
I think the warm on cool and light on dark silhouette of the whale is working really well! Its a really great piece.
Sofie Schollaert last edited by Sofie Schollaert
Well, I think this is it... I could keep on working it for another month I think, but at one time I must call it a day... Just not sure if I should put the texture on... I'll sit on that for one more day
lenwen last edited by
@sofie_designed I think it looks much better! I can feel it in the ocean already
Looking forward for the final post!
Johanna Kim last edited by
@sofie_designed Love how this one developed. Your values looks great and I like you left room for text. It's a wonderful illustration.
@johanna-kim thanks a lot!!
Miriam last edited by Miriam
Please disregard if I'm too late and you are finished with this--
I just was a little confused at first by the fish behind the rake. It took me a bit to figure out what was going on there. At first glance, it looked like a funky dorsal fin, since it kind of blends with the color of the whale.
Are you able to move the fish? I was thinking it should be moved completely away from the rake, but if you really like the overlap (it is cool to see it through the tines), it might work to move it just a little higher and little further forward so you are able to see most of the fish.
It's just a tiny detail, so don't worry if you can't change it.
Overall, it looks really good!
@miriam I finished it and sent it in but I get what you mean! Thanks! I thought the little fish behind the whale would give it some more depth but I didn't take the colours into account. Something to think about next time