Spring Critique by Lee White-my revision
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A long time ago @Lee-White revised an image of mine (digital) on one of the SVS videos "Spring Critiques." I have finally revised the image based on his critique, but decided to switch to watercolor. Although I know there is much room for improvement (especially values/my weakness) it is definitely better-thanks Lee!
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I love the design change, and I am not a water color expert so I cannot really comment on the execution. Looks good!!
Btw is @Lee-White still doing these sort of critiques? I can’t find it on the SVS home page anymore.
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@eric-castleman Thank you Eric although the image looks a little washed out and fuzzy in the image but not so much in person, soft watercolors are so hard for me to scan and reproduce true to color. Ya, I am not seeing Lee's critiques on the site either. Perhaps it has filled up.
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wow Lisa, the evolution is fantastic, really love the after the critique from Lee one :)) it really has a lovely Spring mood and the composition is fab
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@catru Thank you, definitely owe my progress to Lee:)
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so cool that you went back to this. You are so different now as an artist. You have come a long way! And it's not due to me, it's due to you!
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@lee-white Well they say stand on the shoulders of giants, you are definitely one of my giants, I am still striving to learn many things especially the whimsy and magic you create
Thanks again Lee
