Spring Critique by Lee White-my revision
After A long time ago @Lee-White revised an image of mine (digital) on one of the SVS videos "Spring Critiques." I have finally revised the image based on his critique, but decided to switch to watercolor. Although I know there is much room for improvement (especially values/my weakness) it is definitely better-thanks Lee!
Eric Castleman last edited by
I love the design change, and I am not a water color expert so I cannot really comment on the execution. Looks good!!
Btw is @Lee-White still doing these sort of critiques? I can’t find it on the SVS home page anymore.
@eric-castleman Thank you Eric although the image looks a little washed out and fuzzy in the image but not so much in person, soft watercolors are so hard for me to scan and reproduce true to color. Ya, I am not seeing Lee's critiques on the site either. Perhaps it has filled up.
catru last edited by
wow Lisa, the evolution is fantastic, really love the after the critique from Lee one :)) it really has a lovely Spring mood and the composition is fab
@catru Thank you, definitely owe my progress to Lee:)
Lee White last edited by
so cool that you went back to this. You are so different now as an artist. You have come a long way! And it's not due to me, it's due to you!
@lee-white Well they say stand on the shoulders of giants, you are definitely one of my giants, I am still striving to learn many things especially the whimsy and magic you create Thanks again Lee