Travelling Circus challenge Snake woman

[Leontine]

Hi there, here's my first attempt for a character challenge, Snake woman. critques are welcome!

[David Page]

So cool Her hair is amazing.

[Leontine]

@David-Page Thanks David, thats really nice! I like your girly character aswell!

[Steve Young]

I think you have done a really great job, though she look a tad stiff.

[Leontine]

@Steve-Young Thanks Steve, Ill work on that!

[Thrace]

I think everything about her looks amazing! Nice job

[Craig Babin]

Beautiful. I love her eyes.

[Naroth Kean]

nicely done I really like her outfit and the snake.

[Rich Green]

Really nicely done - there are so many great details and good drawing skills on display in this one!

[Leontine]

@Craig-Babin Thank you!

[Leontine]

@Naroth-Kean Thank you!

[Leontine]

@Rich-Green Thank you!

[Leontine]

@Thrace-Shirley-Mears Thank you!

[Jana]

Great Job, Leontine!
Steve mentioned that the girl looks a tad stiff. That is also what I noticed, but I think it fits pretty well to the character.
My interpretation was, that she might not feel pretty good in this job (she is carrying a snake!), but she tries to hide this from the audience. This was only my guess, because it would fit to her face, which looks also not super happy. I don't know if this was your intention or not.

I love the sepia tone of this piece a lot!

[bharris]

I like your concept a lot and you've done a great job on your lighting! I agree with Steve that she looks a bit stiff. I was thinking with the way her hip is propped and should is dropped maybe her empty hand would look better lower toward her body. Just a thought.