25 Jul 2017, 15:11
Looks great so far. You can add some sun light rays poking through the trees that would really add to it.
July contest: Independence WIP
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@ambiirae Very kind of you to say. Thanks!
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I like #1 The character design and the colors
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#4 is the best for me it's a great angle and I think it gets the story told effectively.
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#4 is the winner for me as well.
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@bnewman Sounds like we're all on board with version 4. Love the style, love the less background detail - really makes the bird pop. Great job, looking forward to seeing it finished.
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Thanks folks. I've been staying up way too late working on this. Something happened last night, not sure what but I got into a groove and I'm quite happy with the way the parents turned out. Everything is coming together now. Here is where I'm at.
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Looks great so far. You can add some sun light rays poking through the trees that would really add to it.
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Looking great!
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It's coming together very nicely!
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This is such a good piece. My suggestion would be that the white on the parents is a bit bright and the white on the bird leaving is a bit gray. I think if you switch that the baby bird will pop out even more and mom and dad will recede a bit, to emphasize the leaving. Love this one, captures a really good independent moment we can all relate to.