Fall critique update
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@Lee-White, @evilrobot, @Suzy-Heitz, @Charlie-Eve-Ryan, @Dulcie, and anyone else who has suggestions... Based on Lee's critique, here are my updates. Are there areas that need more work? Is it good enough to be a portfolio piece? Lee- Thanks for all the suggestions Saturday!
Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
Instagram: joy_illustrated
Website: joyheyer.com -
@Joy-Heyer Joy, this is adorable. The details you've added are nice and make scene feel complete. Well done!
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@Joy-Heyer This is lovely!
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@Joy-Heyer Hi Joy - I am not sure what this looked like before but I am really enjoying what you have shown here. I love the wolf being in shadow through the window like that. It adds such a great sense of drama. And your pig characters are really cute - love the two hiding behind the chair and all of the family photos around.
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There ya go!!! very nice!
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Great improvement with the shadow of the wolf! It all looks awesome!
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@Suzy-Heitz, @lmrush, @Rich-Green, @Katie-W Thank you so much!
@Lee-White Your critique TOTALLY helped! It's amazing how getting input helps open ones eyes to what is needed. Thanks! -
Would you mind posting the before for those of us that haven't seen it?
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Sure! Here it is.
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Wonderful piece! The changes really are a big improvement!
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Love the added piggies and the background details! Nicely done!!
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It was a great piece before, and now even better! I thought this was a really interesting critique to watch and well done for implementing the advice so well...the transparent shadow is so much better, love the pictures and added piggies - it's a lovely portfolio piece
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Thank you so much for sharing!!!! I can't wait to watch the critique, you must be so proud of this piece! The first piece was great, the additions make you a pro!
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Definitely a portfolio piece. Fantastic work.
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Great job!!
