Yours really look awesome by the way!@NoWayMe Really nice work and thank you!
If you have time and they can help, I would run this logo by @lee-white or @will-terry.
I don't have much experience with logo design but I know that rhythm, spacing, balance and letter/image clarity at all sizes is important.
The hand letter of the name is really cute and I love that you have two different fonts in different colors that tie into the colors of the girl, but I am not sure if you are running into some spacing and clarity issues and maybe an overall balance issue with the way the letters/words are stacked.
It also looks like the tail of the Y was not followed through smoothly on the curved tail. Right now it does not look purposeful, so it reads as a mistake.
I hope that makes sense and I could be wrong, overall really great start but I think it would be good to have the SVS instructors or someone with more type/logo experience then me weigh in on it.
It is wonderful that you are taking this step in your business!!