hey everyone, continuing with our "critique" series, I would love some images to use in my lecture for the scbwi summer conference. The topic is how to design to enhance storytelling and I need lots of example of both good work and also work that could be improved.
So anything you want to put in this thread would be much appreciated! : )
Thanks!
-Lee
SVS Faculty Instructor
www.leewhiteillustration.com
How about this?
@Mimi-Simon that is nice! but they can all be improved! Including the ones Jake, Will, and I do!
SVS Faculty Instructor
www.leewhiteillustration.com
@Lee-White yes absolutely! theres always stuff I would change even when I look back at work from just a few months ago (or a day after i think i'm done)
@Lee-White Looking forward to your presentation!
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Thanks everyone. Some of this info will be familiar to you if you have seen all my lectures and classes, but it will be put together in a new way with more new info too.
This is my latest work and and any feedback and critiques would be awesome!
@Lee-White here is another from an svs prompt
@Lynniesketches I saw this on the SCBWI portfolio showcase. Great stuff!
@Mimi-Simon Thank you! I've seen your work on there, too. You have a nice portfolio!
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Not sure if you’ve already done it. But here’sa piece I made recently
Is it ok to include text?
@Lee-White also spot illos ok? 
@Asyas_illos yep, spots work too. I'm still adjusting my presentation, so keep 'em coming. Thanks everyone!
Couldn’t decide on one, so here’s a few 
(cross posted) I am working on this piece for the final assignment in the creative composition class. Any feedback is greatly appreciated! 
@Laura-Hunt I edited it a bit...
hey everyone, continuing with our "critique" series, I would love some images to use in my lecture for the scbwi summer conference. The topic is how to design to enhance storytelling and I need lots of example of both good work and also work that could be improved.
So anything you want to put in this thread would be much appreciated! : )
Thanks!
-Lee
