October Contest: GLOW!

[rubeda]

[mzameckaart]

I see there are many strong contestants this month! Should be interesting!

I made a piece as well, not sure if it won't be again considered as an unclear story. To be honest I struggle with coming up with ideas that are not too complex and not requiring a context. This is sth I'm still learning, so that's how I view Critique Arena: as an opportunity to learn. I don't want to make sth banale, but as a result I feel like I end up with sth that only makes sense in my own head
And I admit, I took a risk with that angle

I would be interested to know what anyone makes of what's going on here

[ArtistErin]

@mzameckaart From what I could see, is this an underwater civilization in a microscopic form, holding a ceremony, with the cat outside looking on? Not sure what the other character is and thought she's a mermaid that is misplaced? Anyway I could be totally off but I do want to say your rendering and paint are beautiful.

[ArtistErin]

@mzameckaart Ok looking closer that's not a mermaid, she's the owner of the cat, she's obviously human holding a glass of water. Sorry about the mistake!!

[Kim Rosenlof]

This was a busy month for me, but I was able to do an illustration for the prompt "glow". It is definitely not my favorite piece, but it's something. I considered not entering this month because of not having a lot of time to illustrate, but I have been entering the contest every month for a couple of years now, so it didn't feel right not entering something . At least I got some drawing time in.

[Kim Rosenlof]

@mzameckaart I actually like the angle. I love all the people in the bowl. Makes me want to know the whole story.

[Kim Rosenlof]

@kirsten-mcg These are great! I am interested in the bird story, and love the cozy campfire illustration.
Don't you hate it when you notice things after submitting? I do that all the time.

[Kim Rosenlof]

@Jeremy-Ross The characters are so cute!

[Kim Rosenlof]

@JacksonAdamsArt This is funny! Love the concept.

[Kim Rosenlof]

@LauraA I am really curious to know what is going on in this story; it is sinister, but beautifully done. I love how you did the ghost/spirit and the wallpaper.

[Martha Johnston]

Did a variation my dream farm entree. Its too late to enter the variation but what do you think? do you like this one better?
.Its based on a baby deer my son in law rescued out of a river on maui. They bottle fed her and she lived with them like one of their dogs.

The tubes I drew are based on the aquaponic systems . https://www.instagram.com/p/CcYP1MgJ9mB/
Sweet rescued deer is here. https://www.instagram.com/p/CMKnooXA7Lk/



[mzameckaart]

@Kim-Rosenlof @ArtistErin Haha so again my concept is quite unclear!

The story is: the girl doesn't know that there are tiny ppl having their tiny world in her plant terrarium, but she is about to realize it, as they had just discovered fire. She got up in the middle of a night to get a glass of water and stopped, as she saw a mysterious glow. Her cat has been able to see the tiny ppl for a while now (their "cave paintings" are a clue). Tiny ppl have been painting the things they could see - cat paw, random, everyday objects that the girl was putting near the terrarium, occasional insect they had to chase off...
I know, way too elaborate!

[LauraA]

@Kim-Rosenlof Yeah, it may not be a good Critique Arena entry, as it's based on a middle grade novel and requires some context. I'm working on building up a middle grade/YA portfolio. But I stuck it in anyway since it had some glow and I finished it on the 31st.

Question, because I just wonder if anyone else can see it or knows the context: Can you tell what the little girl is doing, and any idea why?

The basic story, without spoilers: The illustration is from Ophie's Ghosts by Justina Ireland. It is set in the early 1920s with allusions to the past. The young girl, Ophie, can see ghosts and thus gets wrapped up in a mystery in the house where she works. This is part of the final scene. The author weaves themes of racism in with the mystery/ghost story part, using the latter as a vehicle to illuminate the former. Can't say more without giving it away, but it's done really well.

BTW, I think your concept is genius! Kudos for being able to knock out a great piece even during a busy month!

[LauraA]

@mzameckaart Love it! There is a mini civilization in a terrarium. The cat sees everything, of course, but the owner is clueless. What really cracks me up is the "cave paintings" of the cat paw, fly, and cell phone.

I'm not entirely sure, however, what's going on with the owner and the glass of water. Is it meant to show that she is just passing through at night and missing everything, and if so, why is the water sloshing out? If she sees the scene and is surprised, why is the looking away? Alternatively, I wonder if there's something in the water that has to do with the mini civilization, but I don't see anything.

Wait, do I see a tiny skeleton on the bottom left corner outside the bowl? I don't know if people will be able to see the whole story in the Critique Arena format, but I think you should keep developing it!

Nice draftsmanship, too!

P.S. Just saw your explanation!

[mzameckaart]

@LauraA Wow, you caught on every little hidden detail! Good eye The water in the glass is spilling because the girl stopped suddenly while noticing the glow

[mzameckaart]

@LauraA I am also aiming at middle-grade
The girl in your illustration is holding something, some kind of gemstone? She is also hiding another object behind her back, but i can't see what it is. Has she perhaps summoned this ghost somehow?

[Chantal Goetheer]

@mzameckaart I was thinking maybe the mini people in the terrarium are worshiping the 'gods' they see in the sky, hence the murals they are making. They seem to be having a ceremony around the fire.

[Chantal Goetheer]

@Kim-Rosenlof I love the change of roles here! Where the kid doesn't even notice because he's so absorbed in his phone it seems.

[Chantal Goetheer]

@LauraA the girl is holding something. i was thinking maybe holy water to scare away the ghost bit she seems to be doubting if she should help the lady in the bed or not. Given your explanation of the book my guess is she's mistreated by her mistress.

[ArtistErin]

@mzameckaart Oh WOW ok! I see where this is now that I can get into studying it knowing the story! What a really cool novel idea! I'm inspired by your approach in your angles and perspective...

I had a similar idea I was trying to flesh out but shelved it a few months ago with a dollhouse and a little girl wishing she could "disappear" away from her actual life and go into living with her dollhouse family, and she makes a secret wish one day and suddenly she wakes up in her dollhouse friend's bed, playing, moving furniture, etc. until she misses her mom and wants back in her human world again...

Thank you for helping me breathe life into this again! I shelved cultivating this because I felt so frustrated with my sketches not coming out the way I intend and knew I needed more work in perspective and character design. Anyway, just wanted to thank you a ton...