9 Sept 2022, 23:29
@frankiiij thanks for all that wonderful feedback and the suggestions. I did like how it’s kind of like “a box of chocolates, you never what you’re gonna get”. But you made some very good connections there! 
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My little Cloud wips :)
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@frankiiij thanks for all that wonderful feedback and the suggestions. I did like how it’s kind of like “a box of chocolates, you never what you’re gonna get”. But you made some very good connections there!
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What do you guys think of the addition of the buttons and handle and bottles? I couldn’t figure out how to put clouds into the box and make it look it good, but I wanted some sort of clue to his process, because yes they’re magical but it just need something concrete I think. They’re are just sketched so not permanent yet.
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@Asyas_illos I like the additions. I also like that you made the shoe laces more freely moving, prior I initially thought it was a missing leg. I think his process is clearer with the bottles.
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@AngelinaKizz haha I thought that myself lol that’s why I switched it up!
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@Asyas_illos Love this!
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@Asyas_illos I like the extra elements. Adds to the “lived in” feel of the world.
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@Johanna-Kim @KevinTreaccar thank you!
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Hey guys been a while, got somethings going on in my life that have been affecting my creativity lately, but hoping to get back into the swing of things. I’ve been really struggling with finding another good concept. Thank goodness I popped that one out early! Anyway here’s a new idea I e very roughly sketched out. Is story clear? Composition could probably still use some tweaking. Thanks friends
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@Asyas_illos I feel like they’re looking for their dog in the fog at night? I’m sorry you’re going through a rough patch, feel free to reach out if you want to vent
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@AngelinaKizz thanks
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@Asyas_illos Looks like this is a family who has lost their dog in the clouds/fog at night.
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Fog is still clouds right?
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@Asyas_illos Yes:) I had to look this same question up a few days ago. It's just a difference of altitude. Looking mysterious...
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@Asyas_illos fog is absolutely clouds
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Made lots of progress since yesterday. I’m wondering if the the red line adds anything to the story or if it’s unnecessary. Also wondering if I should reduce opacity of the fog a little? Thoughts?
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@Stephanie-H yes it’s to keep them from getting seperated but the dog broke free. And yes fog is usually see through but I wanted to appear very thick that’s why they are having trouble finding the dog. But I’ll play around with it a little
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Does this opacity work?
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@Asyas_illos This is looking good
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@Frogpunzel I’ve fixed it since but thanks!