Riley Sketch WIP
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Okay , so I have a story concept for this boy. He's a very anxious, worrisome child and has been invited to his first campout with friends but has many fears about what he'll need for every possible thing that he could possibly need so he builds this very elaborate camp contraption but through out the story he ends up giving all these to other children at the party who needs them more and he actually ends up having fun just sleeping under the stars with friends. now to the sketch... what can I do to make it stronger. Thanks
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@larue very cute! And good job on the perspective!
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I think you’re going in a great direction with this but the first thing that came to mind to me was that the garage doesn’t look messy enough. You’ve got Riley being be proud but the "garage was trashed" part of the prompt could be shown more.
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@griffin Okay, I'll try harder:/ Thanks
