Current work feedback :)

[Tony Barber]

@aprilshin

Kind words, thank you for the feedback! I'll have a play with the sharp shaped lines/edges and find a happy medium.

[Annaaronson]

@Tony-Barber These are really great. I especially love the first one

[Kara_Bazley]

These look great! I love your style!

[Tony Barber]

@Annaaronson Thank you! Yes, this is one of my favs; It also includes a bit more than just some character work.

Cheers.

[Tony Barber]

@Kara_Bazley Thank you so much! I'm going for a colorful paper cutout type style. I was thinking of adding split pins into the images.

cheers.

[Tristan Lapetz]

@Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

[LauraA]

These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

[Tony Barber]

@Tristan-Lapetz said in Current work feedback :

@Tony-Barber Your color contrast is a joy and I love the way your edges have a slight clunky scissor cut to them. I agree with aprilshin and think some curves might bring this characteristic even more. Have you tried doing one on paper yet? A quick study of these cut out and layered with card stock might help inform your emulations in some odd unanticipated way. Anyways, have fun! These look like a blast!

Hey! thanks for the feedback; in response, do mean having some more rounded curves to the clunky scissor look I'm going for?

Cheers.

[Tony Barber]

@LauraA said in Current work feedback :

These are adorable! I really like the cut paper look and the simplicity of them. The only thing I'd say is that the purple monster has a less paper texture than the bus or other pieces. But keep creating pieces like this and you'll do really well!

The feedback is much appreciated! I think the texture got lost, fighting with the several details of the monster's face.

Thank you

[Tristan Lapetz]

@Tony-Barber Yes! I was referring to the clunky cut look. I think it could add some nice variation and make it slightly more realistic in a characterful way that I don't think would detract form the style.

Have fun!

[sybilminter]

@Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback slope game:

Hey all,

I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.

Thanks,

Tony.

These are adorable!

[Tony Barber]

@sybilminter Thank you I can imagine these illustrations in a children's book!

[1 slopalice]

@Tony-Barber said in Current work feedback slope game:

Hey all,
I would love some general feedback on my current work. I'm aiming for a sort of a papercut /textured look; building details with the basic shapes. I feel like I'm on to something with these. Any feedback would be great.
Thanks,
Tony.

They are so awesome.