WIP November Contest
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Hi Everyone!
Below is my thumbnail for the November contest "Together." Curious if anyone has any thoughts on the composition. A few questions:
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Does it draw the eye from the grandparents to the kids and back?
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I don't have a "triangle" or "golden ratio" so any thoughts on things to add to make the flow better?
Any help is always appreciated. Thanks!
Josh
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Looks great to me. I might think about opening up the grandma's pose to make a stronger silhouette with her right arm, maybe add a bit of overlap between the characters too.
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@Matthew-Oberdier Good call on the silhouette. I want her to read as "love-y" as possible! Also, I see what you mean about overlap. I think I'll move the grandpa behind the grandma a little bit. Thanks!
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@JoshuaDages looks great to me. You created a great implied line with the curved road.
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@chrisaakins Thanks! I was hoping that would help guide the eye.
