9 Jan 2020, 00:15

Okay. I’m putting myself out there and I’m a little nervous with so many talented artists out on this forum, But I want honest feedback. I have a goal to interact with more artists online. And I’m tired of the “It looks good” response from family and friends and I want to improve.

I am a graphic designer wanting to improve my drawing an illustration skills. I have an Etsy shop Nichole Marie Printery and am I wanting to roll out some more quality illustrations rather than just simple graphics and lettering. But I think you can get a feel for my style a little bit from my shop listings.

Anyway, here is my drawing:

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It was all done digitally on Procreate.

I would really like to make it better and have something ready for Easter. So lets have at it. Honest to Zeus truth. What isn’t working? How can I make it better? Is this something you would buy for yourself or gift to someone for Easter?

On a more technical/process side, any tips with you’d recommend on Procreate that can help would be greatly appreciated.

Side note: Am I following the correct protocol in posting this critique request? Just want to help keep things organized and help this post get found.