8 May 2019, 12:42
Couldn’t help but tweak and doodle around with last nights work before moving on to a fresh one today.
Mermay Concept Thumbnails - Critiques Wanted
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@Laurasketches Facing each other is something I didn't consider. I did have an idea about having them have a tug of war over a trident or spear so that might work in that situation. Do you think people will get the tales/tails reference without it being spelled out? In my packaging work sometimes I can spell things out and people still totally miss the whole point.
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I like the idea of the figures looking in because it keeps the focus moving into (as opposed to away from) your design.I like the idea that they have conflict over a spear (maybe disguised as a writing device, like a pencil?.. which would "sell" your story of "tales" even more visually. Go!
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@Laurasketches Oh, that might just nail the concept for a non-fiction book!!! Concept over craft, right?
And you take all credit for that idea! I'll definitely be taking both 1 and 2 into more thumbnails but you've put a twist on #1 enough to sway me in it's favor so far. -
#2 has my vote!
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@shinjifujioka Thanks, Shinji! Your illustration portfolio is so beautiful! Your illustrations are a rare mixture of innocence and adventure. While your style and techniques differ I think they evoke the same feelings/emotions of David Weisner's work.
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I only had time to work up one thumbnail tonight. Thank you @Laurasketches - I really love this concept!
If I go with this concept I thinK I need to work on the scale of MERMAIDS vs TAILS and just the lettering layout in general.
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Couldn’t help but tweak and doodle around with last nights work before moving on to a fresh one today.
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New thumbnails for comparison.
Only the middle is drastically different; cred to @Laurasketches for the idea. I think it fits the book concept more and will be the one I take to comp though the other design may make it into the overall cover design - on the back perhaps?
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@Amber-Lynn-Benton you could always do #1 as a back cover and # 2 as the front cover.
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@chrisaakins I would agree. I think #2 is the strongest visually and story telling wise (it draws me in the most). It is telling me the story of 2 mermaids trying to write their version of the story.
#1 looks to me like it should be small on the back cover with a bunch of text. I think I would make it even more round, giving it an even stronger ying/yang feeling.
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@Amber-Lynn-Benton Thanks, that's extremely generous to be compared to the likes of David Weisner.
I think your thumbnails are looking so good—can't wait to see more progress on it!