I think your first two images ("tea party in the clouds" and "Moon Keeper") are much stronger than "spreading Springtime-which feels more like a spot illustration. Also, the first two images have a really wonderful way that the creatures are interacting with the "weather" elements in the image that is really imaginative and charming. I would look for a way that that theme could be continued throughout. As far as composition goes, you are not creating a foreground and background...which is fine, as the action mainly lives in the middle space, but it could created more visual interest if you made more going on in background and foreground. (example: scarf moving forward at the viewer into the foreground in "moon keeper"). That being said, I love this style and I think your characters and color schemes are so appealing. Lovely work!
I made the deadline!! Mermaid in a bottle.
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