Hey everyone!
Thanks so much to those who have given me all the brilliant feedback, I've really appreciated it and it helps so much!
Here's a little update on the piece, i've made the title bigger like you suggested @Susy-Barton-Garner and you're right it looks much better, I know it should probably be even bigger but i'm worried about ruining the composition
I think i've managed to adjust the suitcase and foreground @demetrius , i can see where you were coming from now so thank you!
Hopefully his paws don't look like pig hooves now @Dima-Eichhorn ? haha! And I fixed the little girls gaze direction @MichaelaH thank you again
I've done some quick colour roughs so I'm just wondering which you all prefer? Or none of them? I'm wondering whether I should drop the whole same colour background idea, however all the people will have more detail on them and be shaded etc.
Also do you think the foreground works with the walking legs and the size of the new title? It overlaps the policeman a bit, so i'm worried that it looks a bit cramped with the bird plonked on the sign too!
Anyways, thanks everyone!