11 May 2017, 15:25

I like what Joslyn suggested. The tangents are a great consideration and should be easy to fix. I'm new to this so please take my thoughts with a grain of salt. I personally am ok with the stuffed animal next to the girl as you have it but I think being able to see the her other hand may help the form and reduce that tangent. I'm not sure. Also, the circling of the tube from one side of the bed to the arm on the other side feels weird. Maybe you could play around with switching the balloon and the Iv fluid or having the tube go to the arm that's on the same side and see what you think it does for the composition. I love the character design and look forward to seeing the finished product.