17 Aug 2016, 23:15
@Pamela-Fraley Oh wow! I just imagine waking up and seeing one of these guys chillin' out front. Thats super cool, but also good you teach the kids early haha. Thanks for the comment. 
Jack's Concept Art
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@Jack-B Hey Jack these are looking good! - not sure you are looking for critique but i thought i would mention the neck on these and the last post - the neck is traveling straight up in these drawing - i think a super easy tweak would be to have the neck tilting forward to meet the skull - even tilting a few degrees forward will have a big effect - right now there is a vague sense that something is wrong - i have a strong feeling it is just the neck - maybe the straight neck is a design choice? But i think it is worth changing and seeing - anyways ..super impressed by your work - feel free to ignore if you like
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Hey Kevin, thanks so much for the advice! I am always open to hearing how I could improve my work. I am going to try that with my next sketch of her and see how it looks.
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Does the neck on the first sketch look more natural? @Kevin-Longueil
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@Jack-B Hello again Jack - here is what i am thinking it is a very subtle difference but i think it is important - i mostly just did a quick cut and paste by rotating your necks a few degrees - not sure it comes across without a side-by-side... i changed the last drawing a bit too
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@Kevin-Longueil Dude thanks so much. That makes a lot of sense and definitely seems less stiff to me. I will be sure to start exaggerating that slant more to achieve a more natural appearance. Thanks again!
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Finally in Utah, and I already survived a moose encounter! I got lucky though, maybe I should stick to art and not hiking?
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@Jack-B Haha! This happens all the time to my family. We live in Alaska and they are in our yard all the time. We do moose drills with the kids. Glad you made it out okay.
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@Pamela-Fraley Oh wow! I just imagine waking up and seeing one of these guys chillin' out front. Thats super cool, but also good you teach the kids early haha. Thanks for the comment.
- about a month later
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College has been so busy with all my gen eds. Can't wait to take more art and animation classes!
- 2 months later
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Catch me at CTNx this year! Message me if you want to meet up!
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Awesome work! best of luck to you in school
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Thank you!