5 Apr 2016, 17:37

@Sharon-Sordo This is such a nice piece Sharon! - I agree that the first drawing is working better - I feel in this newer composition that my brain is looking for something important in the window area - then it scans over to the rest of the image but I keep coming back to the window area - I tried flipping the image and it helped dramatically with this - I don't know if it is any better than the first drawing that way but maybe horizontal flip and see if you like it - it puts the shopkeeper in a much more important position that way and the composition sends me around the page too which is good - anyways just thoughts - really nice piece - I know it will turn out great 🙂