2 Apr 2016, 19:40

@Sharon-Sordo Hey there. I think this is fantastic! Just love the whole concept! My only critique is that I'm not sure who the 'focus' is supposed to be on. The bakery clerk is front and center while the girl seems to be the one experiencing this dream but is sort of lost in the lower left corner. Perhaps the focus should be on her? I bet a lot of that will clear up when you add the color too. Either way your stuff is amazing and I look forward to see this progress.

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