@ChloeGreenbergArt Hi Chloe, I have attached a rough (very rough) sketch of what I feel would work for this illustration. I think your horizon line was too low. I raised it up a bit and added some more ceiling to push the room further back so the scale looks more correct. Also, at the corner of the room (behind Barbara), the floor line should come toward the viewer. And tho you may not see the actual corner in the final illustration, since your perspective is looking up, that corner should "tilt" a bit, and will determine where the right side floor line comes from.
Lastly, I moved things around a bit as I felt that your male character was being blocked by the open door, and was of more significance than the people in the doorway.
And if I can offer one more suggestion, perhaps have Barbara in more of a singing pose to give the spread more variety, like the photo below (without the mic).
Hope this helps!