16 Aug 2022, 14:15

@kayleenartlover No, I wouldn't say it's bad as much as it's not yet fully developed or considered as a story. The girl raising her hand is a good starting point. Build the story around her. Why is she raising her hand? How do the classmates react? Is there any twist or surprise (e.g. she is actually raising her hand to go to the bathroom, not to answer the teacher's question)? Finally, is this the best angle to both tell the story and showcase your environment design skill?