May stormN wip(s)
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Both the elephant and the giraffe made me laugh as soon as I saw them so I vote for those.
Laurie DeMott
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@Asyas_illos elephant has my vote!
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@Asyas_illos I second what @demotlj said!
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Playing with size and cropping
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@Asyas_illos I like the composition of the first one. It brings more focus to the storm itself and not whoever is in the plane, though. Which do you want to focus on?
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@Patricia-Dishmon thank you and I agree I have since decided to omit the plane and going hot air balloon!
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@Asyas_illos I like the balloon idea! But I think your colors were working better with that yellow - it really pops against the clouds. But I suppose it depends what you're going for. Maybe you can put a brightly colored or high value character in that balloon and really draw the attention there.
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@Asyas_illos Cute! And I agree with @Kristen-Lango The bright color of the plane was great! If you do put a bright colored character in there, don't forget to tie the colors into the balloon.
Also, why is it that I suddenly feel that the white at the bottom is too white? I'd take the whole background and shift it down so that there are only a few spots of white (maybe from lightning?) and fill in the top with that really dark gray.
I can't wait to see the next update! You work so quickly
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@Kristen-Lango thanks yes I’ve added more detail now
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Still a work in progress!
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@Asyas_illos ooh, i love this green pattern against the dark sky!
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@Asyas_illos me too! what @Valerie-Light said!
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@Valerie-Light @Kristen-Lango thank you
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Not much progress here been writing a lot lately
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Might add a couple more balloons caught in the storm
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@Asyas_illos I think the hot air balloon concept is a winner, Asya! You could have fun experimenting with lots of different compositions and perspectives with this. I'd definitely play around with a composition that brings the hot air balloon forward so we can see the expression on their faces and the gestures better. Maybe there's some action going on in the basket that tells a bit of a story?
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@Katherine thank you for the suggestions! I’ll definitely be playing around to see how I can deliver the best story and composition.
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I added a couple more balloons, what do you guys think? Does the composition still work? I still want the green balloon to be the main focal point. Also I keep going back and forth if I want the lighting or not. I’m thinking not, I don’t want people to think anyone is in danger then again it might lend a hand in the story? I don’t know…
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I also started another one…
