lfse lullabye project. Input please! I need some extra eyes.

[MOO]

I have two illustrations I have been working on. I'm not completely happy with them especially the willow tree one. Redo? Any tips, especially, for the willow one. I might be able to live with the breeze one. Thanks!

[Jonathon B Baker 0]

I'd say on the Willow tree illustration maybe pull up the one branch that's coming down over the face of the boat or put it behind the boat if you want it to look like the boat is going into the willow.

[MOO]

@MOO

That is an improvement. Thanks for your input!

[Jonathon B Baker 0]

Yeah that feels a lot better.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@MOO I think that "Dream Boat" name on your boat should be flipped.

[MOO]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Oh! I flipped the picture and forgot about the word Ha! Thanks!

[MOO]

I cropped it a little and removed the Dreamboat text from the side. It might be fine now for this project. Thanks for your help.