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    • Frost Drive
      Frost Drive last edited by

      I'm working on making some portfolio illustrations, and I wanted to showcase with this one that I can illustrate crowds, perspectives, monsters and cities.
      At first my idea was having a girl ride a monster in a monster world city, but then I changed it near the end to the idea that a girl is trapped in a world full of mean monsters.

      I like H the best. I think the idea of 'i' is good, but it really sucks compositionally. I guess I ran out of gas at the end. lol

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      My Drawing Show: https://www.youtube.com/ArtParlor
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/frostdrive/

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      • Coreyartus
        Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

        I wonder if A, C, D, or E give you a better opportunity to draw city buildings and crowds than other options...

        A, C and H all have a smaller-scaled girl in them, allowing more room for your buildings and crowds. I know you want the emphasis on the girl, obviously, but I think the others lose a bit of that opportunity in the composition.

        Children's Illustration Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusillustration.com
        Art Portfolio: https://www.coreyartusimagery.com

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        • Frost Drive
          Frost Drive @Coreyartus last edited by

          @Coreyartus That's a really good point!! I forgot the point of the illustration with a couple of these thumbs.

          With that in mind this really narrows it down to A C and H! Thanks Corey!!

          My Drawing Show: https://www.youtube.com/ArtParlor
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/frostdrive/

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          • TessaW
            TessaW last edited by

            While my personal fave was D, any number of them would make an awesome illustration. I also really like A and C because there's a lot of movement in them. If you are personally leaning toward H, I'd say go for that one. The overall comp works well and has an interesting subject.

            Website: www.tessawrathall.com

            Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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            • carriecopadraws
              carriecopadraws SVS OG @Frost Drive last edited by

              @Frost-Drive I'm a big fan of C, has a lot of dynamic and looks fun to draw! I'm also a fan of illustrations that have kids who like monsters. But H is a good choice if you're leaning toward that, it has great tension.

              Carrie Copa
              https://carriecopadraws.com/

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              • A
                aprilshin last edited by

                I'm loving these thumbnails! C is my favorite, and I especially love that she's silhouetted against the moon. One suggestion would be to zoom out even more to include more buildings. Maybe you can also play with scale a little more by making the monster really huge so that it's stepping over the buildings. Great work so far!

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                • Heather Boyd
                  Heather Boyd @Frost Drive last edited by

                  @Frost-Drive B,C,F
                  B- perspective cool
                  C- a lot of your elements
                  F- really feel for her

                  Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                  Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca

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