Here's my redo. I'll post the other ones so you can see my progress. Comments welcome.
Well, I think I deleted the first one with Peter flying through the sky.....Anyway, Hopefully this works better. I had some perspective problems pointed out to me by my son on this final one so I tried to fix it by making two levels in the reindeer room. Can't do too much else at this point! But, little fixes, I can do. Thanks!
Your characters are charming, especially love the sad, sickly reindeer. Nice work!
Thank you @! Charlie Eve Ryan!