"Love what you do"-concept sketch,opinions?? :)

[Georgios Christopoulos]

Hello fellow artists!!

This is a piece I m currently working on, and it is supposed to be printed in a canvas and put up my wall.

The general idea is that
"grandpa teaches grandkids about loving what you do , patience and consistency on what you are doing , as they come across a rare flower the has blossomed , that is the symbol of those rare beauties we find now and then ,when we are doing what we love."

Please share your honest opinions about i
I really like how it starts to turn out , but I sure want some feedback from other artists fellas.

See you around!!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Georgios-Christopoulos it’s already looking great. No critiques here

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz thanks so much!

[TessaW]

Not much to critique! Looks good. I'd just watch out for a possible tangent with the girls face and the apron and boys face and the flower. Also double check spelling for definitely. Great job. Can't wait to see it finished.

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@TessaW oops! Noted! Thanks for the tips and advice!appreciate it very much!

[Rachel Horne]

Looks good to me but I agree with the above mention of the apron.

[Georgios Christopoulos]

@Rachel-Horne Thanks a lot for the feedback!