Would welcome critiques -nursery art

[MissMushy]

This year I want to try a side hustle offering digital printables such as nursery art. Thought it might be a way to keep practising kids related stuff while hopefully earning a little something on the side. Would welcome any critiques of the image - is it too messy? Does it look finished enough to offer for sale? Anything glaring I should fix? Thanks in advance SVSers!

[TessaW]

I think it's really cute. I'd recommend adding line-work on the banner as well as darker line-work around the lettering to keep the style consistent throughout the whole piece. I also think the circle detailing on the ball could be cleaned up a bit as the rest of your linework is very clean.

Great job and good luck with sales.

[MissMushy]

@TessaW thanks a lot for taking a look and for the feedback! Makes perfect sense