lullabye illustration again.

[MOO]

Working on another illustration, Here is a rough pencil sketch. Critiques please? Thanks.

[MOO]

I do think I need to round the top of the head a bit more so that it isn't right in line with the bottom of the Mom's nose. Proportions? Thanks.

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen i think the mom’s oroportions are looking great! But the baby’s head is looking too small. Perhaps you can enlarge that. I hope this was helpful.

[MOO]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Thankyou, yes, of course it is helpful. Thank you!

[carlianne]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen do you have reference that you're referring to for this?

[MOO]

This should be more proportional now. Any other fixes? Do the shoulders and hands look okay? I wonder also about the position of the ear..

Thanks! I will look at more references.

[j.sienkowski]

I would suggest getting some photographic reference if you don't already have some. This is a great start, but there a few minor tweaks you might want to make. The baby's left hand looks a little off...I'm not sure why. Maybe its because the right hand looks so good. Also, the way the woman's hand almost perfectly lines up with the baby's head is distracting to me. I would show more of the hand if possible. Good work. Keep it up

[MOO]

@j-sienkowski Thanks! Good points. I have been looking at references but not teh exac pose so I will see if I can find more similar ones. I appreciate your input!

[MOO]

here's a redo and I also painted it.

[KathrynAdebayo]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen well that’s super cute

[MOO]

@KathrynAdebayo Thank you. I think it has improved